All Comments on 'Sister Golden Hair Delight Ch. 29'

to the story. You have great expectations of readers to either remember these characters from an earlier chapter or have patience for you to bring them into the present. You live and breathe these characters, we know only what you tell us. I hope you will be moving the characters to the present. Perhaps showing the new characters in the present and then flashback to the story of their inclusion may have been a better method. We only have questions. Perhaps that is what you meant to do. Your are a good story teller, tell us more about these characters and what them mean to the ongoing plot but hurry, please?

but you have lost and confused me. Perhaps in future chapters you will make it clearer.