All Comments on 'Sister Hyde'

by oggbashan

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SynSlaveSynSlaveover 4 years ago

Loved the Dr Jekyll pun. Multiple twists. The reveal at the end was a nice touch. Kind of wish a short like this had less characters - just needed the three main protaganists (a partner for Dina wasn't even necessary, or could have been a pickup from a bar to all I cared. But who ever complains when a sexy nurse is thrown in? (Oh... I'll knock that against use of I guess)

;)

Thanks for writing!

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Good Read

Although bazaar I really liked this story..

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