All Comments on 'Sister in Law Ch. 06'

boring ending ever.

One comment?? Well, my take is simple. Nancy has an alcoholic husband and she's borderline. Obviously, Nancy wants more of your cock, an I say "your cock' because you wrote it in the first person, so Nancy knows you are fucking Adeline too, and she is planning on a three some. You need at least one more chapter, they are going to get caught, but by who? I'd guess Adedline's husband shows up at the wrong time, you just finished wippng out Nancy, you are dip in Adeliine, in her room, when hubby bursts in and the shit hits the fan. Just an idea. It's been a year, why not finish it? Keep writing.

XYZ

Boring as fuck at the end