All Comments on 'Sister-In-Law Surprise'

Dr beulahthemick; I'm sorry, but surely this is not incest, Sam is his wife's sister, not his. In the UK, incest is sex with a blood relative, i.e. mother, father, brother or sister, not an in-law. As a lot of American law is based on the UK's, I would have thought the same applies there. If, I'm wrong, let me know, good story though about a really loving wife.

Good story, well written too. I always say, “Keep it in the family” you’re a good writer and I’m glad I found this story. Thank You very much.

I really would have liked to have read more of how it worked out over time, but I still gave it 5*.

Sure wish my wife would share me with her sister 🙄 she & I have always had great chemistry as well & openly flirted with each other occasionally groping each other without getting caught but my wife is a very jealous type of woman. Won't dare share me with anyone. Afraid I might fall in love with someone else & leave her. But I love her dearly & she's a great cook, spouse, friend etc. Just doesn't enjoy giving oral but loves receiving it.

Good premise.

But sex happens much too fast. Needed more in the way of preliminaries before se took his cock in her mouth, for example.

And, biy do you need an editor/proofreader. You need to learn the tifference between YOUR and YOU'RE. And DOSE is the amount of medicine one takes; DOZE is a nap.

Three stars.

Well-written, believable story. Loved the real feelings between the characters and the slow buildup to the sex scenes.

Great Story! Wish it were something that could happen to me!

Part 2 would be a great way to introduce a threesome

Platonic not plutonic

Needed a lot more background on the wife and what her problem was with sex and her husband.

MCs too old

Enjoyable and hot fun. Would like some more.

editing needed

Pugent sound is Puget Sound

Plutonic is platonic

your is most of the time "you are or you're"

take the time to do it right.

You are using your when you should be using you’re.

Really

and you say that you live there

You're, not your. At least you didn't spell it yore.

It's Puget Sound, not Pugent Sound

I could only wish.... great story!!!

Good story and good solution.

However, the commenters below caught exactly my issues. You're vs your, and the other errors

For me it was a fantastic story and I believe that his wife loved him to the moon and back and did what she knew he needed to keep the marriage alive. Loved it

Excellent story. Nice story line. Need a followup. Maybe have Sharon watch the two of them.

Your instead of you're, then loose instead of lose, and dose instead of does. Yes, American English is tough but if you're going to use it to write stories learn to use it properly. Good story for sure but bad grammar and usage is distracting. Lot's of people think it's ok to be sloppy with language. Lot's of people are ignorant too.

5 Stars - Great story....is there more?

I liked the story since I've been in a similar situation for some years. My wife would like to have sex, but her various health difficulties, involving both inside and outside , has made sex impossible. She might be okay if I strayed, but neither of her sisters could excite even a hint of desire even if they tried....too bad.

bare5747 I couldn't have said it better. It was one of the best I have read, and totally believable. JEF

Great story. Makes a change for the hero to have a monster cock, pretending it is only normal

Loved it ! As the characters are in their 50's, you didn't waste time describing them. Loved the story.

Ignoring the typos, it was good.

you're means you are.

platonic not plutonic

it's means it is

"I am all for the crab however! That sounds great! Fresh from the sea! What are we having with it?" She was smiling and clearly loved that this was one of the opportunities up here. (Excess quotations removed)

challenges not challenge's

you're means you are.

platonic not plutonic

it's means it is

"I am all for the crab however! That sounds great! Fresh from the sea! What are we having with it?" She was smiling and clearly loved that this was one of the opportunities up here. (Excess quotations removed)

challenges not challenge's

You don't have to check-in suitcases in the US?

"She says she didn't check any bags so it wont be too long I'm sure."

"I showed her all the rooms and I dropped her suitcase in the guest room."

Even though it has been 17 years since the wife could tolerate sex, she is too jealous to do this for me. Even the fact she had two affairs years ago is not enough to let her break free.

I loved how this love affair grew. Sweet emotional romantic and hot.

I read as written and enjoyed it very much. It was real and so much a good compromise. I gave you 5 and thanks for sharing with us.

In addition to comments by others -

".. teeming with crab", not teaming!

"I threw the small one's' back .." - drop the first inverted comma - "I threw the small ones' back "!

Tawny Port!

All together, you need to get an Editor who knows how to spell!

I love love this story...maybe it's Southern California angle....