by PaulAvory
I love this story, I hope their is many more stories to come. I hope this turns into a 10+ chapter series.
Dude, you left us hanging! Great writing, great buildup. Enjoyed very much.
There's an old story. One that I feel you might have read. You're doing a fantastic "retelling" with new elements. Great job, I'm really thrilled with what you're doing here. If you remember the original story please credit it so I can re-enjoy that too. Keep it up (heh). 5 stars. Brilliant work here.