All Comments on 'Sister Loves Facials Ch. 02'

by PaulAvory

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sexymeupsexymeupover 2 years ago

still one star, this was no better than the 1st chapter

SandMan29331SandMan29331over 2 years ago

I love this story, I hope their is many more stories to come. I hope this turns into a 10+ chapter series.

ImnotreallyherenowImnotreallyherenowover 2 years ago

Dude, you left us hanging! Great writing, great buildup. Enjoyed very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

great story... waiting for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

How could you end it there?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

There's an old story. One that I feel you might have read. You're doing a fantastic "retelling" with new elements. Great job, I'm really thrilled with what you're doing here. If you remember the original story please credit it so I can re-enjoy that too. Keep it up (heh). 5 stars. Brilliant work here.

zooliciouszooliciousover 2 years ago

Really enjoying the buildup. Good storytelling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent story; I hope to see more of this!

ArcDemonDemiurgeArcDemonDemiurgeabout 2 years ago

Great story, please update when you can

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Liking this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I thought it was good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What old story is this like?

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