by CWNiess
I had looked for the original, could not find it, and realized it had been removed. Thanks for sharing again!
I enjoyed the story, and I didn't mind the length. I enjoy when authors expand the story to add detail.
Thank you for the very well put together story.
I think there may have been some other way to put Maria in charge, the DWI thing was a bit far fetched (but it doesn't really matter), but I really enjoyed the rest. Will definitely check out your other stories.
Thanks for reposting, this was one of my favourite stories some years ago. I'm still hoping for part 2 with Kristen and Tom.
Very simple concept(table tennis game) used to great effect. You did a great job building tension. You have a lot of talent.
Literotica.com is not the forum to show you knowledge about table tennis.
Too much into details not adding any value to the story.
Additionally I missed any clue why the party guests should have participated in this at all. The demands were so fare fetched.
At the end Marie's sister was not punished at all but the female guests. Why?
Uhhh... wow... You just blatantly copied one of WrongWriter's stories changing beer pong to ping pong (https://www.literotica.com/s/katie-stuck-naked-at-house-party). Suppose you expanded on parts, but didn't really care for most of that.
Copied from an other story. Also way to long and makes the story boring and confusing.