All Comments on 'Sister Starts My Harem Ch. 03'

One of the sexiest! I hope a LOT more of this is coming! Great job!! 👍🏻

5 stars Plus Really enjoying your story line and how poor Jack is getting teased.

Looking forward to the evening activities and how Jack slowly gets to play with each of the girls with his sister's permission of course. Getting released and making the friends cum. Plus his sister and him get to enjoy themselves and her friends and Jack all party together.

So many directions have fun with them and thanks for writing. MORE PLEASE!

WWHHOooooooo

Just got caught up on the story.

Good job. Would really love it if the entire compound either is already practicing incest or gets seduced into incestuous sex.

Absolutely loving this chapter! Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

There’s another 100 chapters at least to this story

I feel like Jack , hard and looking for a warm, wet place to store my cock.

Very erotic story.

What an exciting group of beauties.

Back to the next chapter.

I just read it again for a better remember and i still love it. just one thing i found a little weird. You wrote, that he went down on his knees and is level with Taylors face. I don’t know his height, but taking my height of 1.85 meter, she must be around 1.4something meter, which wood be quite funny and not really real.

Just a few grammatical/spelling corrections:

"Grown" is the past participle of grew. You meant "Groan" like the low rumbling sound one makes, right?

"Horse" as we all know is the animal. "Hoarse" is the texture of voice.

But all in all... The story left me wanting more. 😁😁😁

Sorry 😞. Jack is impotent

The story is good, I like it. AAAA+++

Four stars for the Humphrey Bogart reference?

Fuck, that’s hot!!!! 5 stars all the way.

WhatsamatterU said

"Four stars for the Humphrey Bogart reference?"

Five for the Heinlein one.

How're things on Luna, Stu?

Jack is written as a very weak and immature individual; completely opposite of what one would expect of a 6 year veteran Naval officer. Yes, there are some. But most of such character are flushed out prior to the 6th year.

Reduces the impact of the story substantially,

I also encountered a glaring problem causing me to skip over s considerable amount of dialogue. 2 stars.