All Comments on 'Sister Swap'

Just NO! I can see why your single, what's the matter can't keep a partner?

i understand why because your a sick fuck, i just don't know anybody would write about it.

Whatever floats your boat. Can't see how this wouldn't end in a disaster and destroyed marriages....but it is your story. Probably won't read anymore chapters through!

This was a great story with a great plot. I can't wait for the finish, hopefully with illistrations. Please, be a frequent writer. Good, erotic stories are hard to find.

Can't wait to see what the next few days will bring. A very well-written and arousing fantasy.

Wow, I really liked the story. It was sexy, erotic, well written and a great fantasy. I cannot understand some of the negative comments you aren't destroying marriages in real life. You took a fantasy that wasn't illegal and expressed it, for that I say thank you, fantasize more, write more and submit what you write.

Keep up the good work, and don't let the negative comments bother you - a truly outstanding effort.

This is exactly what I come to this site to read. Fun, sexy, fantasy where everyone has fun and nobody gets hurt. The fact that it’s well written is a bonus.

VERY SEXY and definitely a story to cum by.

very sexy story!!! Makes me wish my husband would ask his brothers to do this!! hahaha will definitely read more of your stories

But this would be a disaster, don't know if you have tried something like this but I did, it turned out awful for about everybody involed, strictly a fantasy.

Loved it and hope you'll keep on writing. Looking forward to reading about what the next 3 days & nights bring for the sisters & their hubbies!!

this is one of the best on this site in a long time, Great Job!

OK, I guess.

What works for some might not work for others. That swap was one of the most exciting times in our lives. We set some limits (like what we would and wouldn't do when we came home from a vacation) and reluctantly abided by them. One result was that we took more vacations together so that we could bend the rules again ... and again! The siblings did this for over a decade, and then we decided to stop one year. My wife and I still use some of the memories from those years as some of our dirty talk. Wish we'd made videos the way your characters did - would have preserved the memories. Keep writing about this ... particularly the aftermath. I'd love to see how close you come to what we experienced, felt and did. // R1

Hope you are going to continue this is so hot, others might not like it but I do!

This is an incredibly sexy story (and very well written). I can hardly wait to read about what happens during the rest of the trip. You are going to write a follow on chapter, aren't you?!

hope you add more chapters. great idea

This is a great story. Dont pay any attention to the bad comments. If someone is in a secure strong relationship swapping can be a good and fun thing. My wife and i dont swap very often but love the times we do.

Hope to hear about the other 3 days.

This story is amazing. It needs to be continued please!

This is one of the hottest and sexiest stories I have read in a long time! I am dying to hear about the rest of the week and see what everyone decides to do. You are a wonderful writer, allowing the characters to shine through and be indiviuals. Thank you so much for your submission. I hope you continue writing and sharing your delicious fantasies with all of us.

plz...continue the story....i am eagerly awaiting for it...great story..at least one chapter where Marlene fuck hard by Tom & Doug...

it would be cool for this to break out into a bisexual orgy before the week is done.

Oh, don't get me wrong. I loved the story... as far as it went. Then I checked and nothing has been posted in months! I almost want to ask permission to finish the story for you, just so I get to see how it ends!

Thank you , so far.

Please carry on the story telling us of more sex between each couple. Loved the story. Would like to see an illustrated one? Its been so long since you wrote this!

Mike NZ

Any chance that you are going to write about the rest of the week!!!!

this story needs a continuation

This was the only swap my wife felt comfortable with. Her sister is only one year older. Her husband is nine years older than me. We have known each other for more than 30 years. We were all looking for a little spice and we got it. We spent an entire week as man and wife. My brother in law got intimidated when he saw my 8 thick inchs. I loved him making my wife cum all over his beard. My wife got a little hurt when she really pounding her sister doggy style. Had a great week, and plan many more evenings. Just do not let feelings get in the way!!!

Worst on LW ! "1*" !

Very well written as it was exciting every time couple began!

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Having the husbands be surprised by something about their long time wives is such a nice touch. You have to imagine their expressions and the new plans for the future forming in their fevered brains, but it adds quite a bit to this story. well done.

Very well done.

But one question ... Did this one story satisfy your need to write for Literotica for all time? Seven years is a long enough time for your readers to hope to see another story. Thank you

Excellent story.

Even for a fictional story this was ludicrous. There's no chance all three of the men agree to swap. No man is THAT stupid. This isn't something that's going to go away or be forgotten. And its not like they won't see each other all the time and be reminded of their little escapades. What happens when one or two of them want to continue screwing around? Like I said. No man would be THAT stupid. This was both improbable and unbelievable.

1 star

no protection used high chance for pregnancy. What if one or more kids were to come as a result pure bs

Where’s the rest of the story? It just got interesting. I was looking forward to the rest of the players doing their part. Will there be more?

Really nice buildup

This was entertaining, based on an interesting idea of three sisters deciding to swap husbands during an island vacation... off to a good start in a first story by a new writer. A few name switches and a couple of other technical errors, but over all it was a good start.

Now you need to finish the story of the rest of the swaps during the rest of their trip !

Very good story

My wife has 2 sisters. I often fantasize about them especially the older one with the nice thick ass. I never thought about anything like this tho. I have already been told by the wife that fucking her sisters was not an option.

I would like the opportunity to lay my sister-in-law’s.

I loved the story and went for part 2 and was SO disappointed to find there was no more.