All Comments on 'Sister Swap Pt. 02'

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ReedRichardsReedRichardsabout 3 years ago

Uhhh, you THINK this was the first time you both fucked someone else since you’ve been married, but you only KNOW about yourself.

8itgood8itgoodabout 3 years ago

Loved your story line. Brings back nice fantasies of my wife's, three younger sisters. Also wouldn't mind watching my wife with someone else.

DunkirkDunkirkabout 3 years ago

They need to do this swap on a regular basis

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good story and to each his own but the sharing swapping swinging lifestyle almost always ends bad so I’m amazed that people engage with people they are close with like friends, neighbors, coworkers or family. If it didn’t turn out how you thought you are stuck with it in your face forever

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago

They need to swap baby bumps.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 3 years ago

The relationship you presented of Dianne and her husband is not consistent with how your story is playing out. Sure, it's a hot "stroker" story but the plot is inconsistent for anything beyond just that, probably the intent from the start. 4*

kiteareskitearesabout 3 years ago

The lack of communication takes away from a reasonably decent story, it suggest trouble ahead.

A few typos here and there and one set of speech marks set my teeth on edge - "I want you kiss". The kiss was saying "I want you," so should have been written "I want you," kiss.

You would probably get a better reception in Group Sex with this story.

Other than that a decent stroke story, thanks.

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