All Comments on 'Sisterhood - Initiation Ch. 01'

Get the next chapter out soon...........smiles

Vampires?

No, no vampires I'm afraid. Only dick-witches!

Great story just loved it more please

Thank you Anon! More on the way.

An amazing artist called Phever has drawn a portrait of Leah. You can see it here: https://i.pixxxels.cc/51MB44XT/Portrait-Leah.jpg

Inevitably, as happens with many stories, it's sad to see that there's essentially no sex in this first chapter but that's to be expected because it's always awkward to incorporate such stuff so early in a story. However, with 44 chapters I'm quite sure that we'll all get at least our fair share of entertainment of the more horizontal kind in due course.

My method of getting sex involved early on when writing is to create longer chapters, so I accept the shortage here. Nevertheless it's going to be great once they get to be intimate - here's hoping that we don't have to wait until chapter 10 or so!

But, sex or no sex, I've given this 5 stars because of the quality of the writing - it's clean, correct and charming - there seem to be no typos and nothing I could find in the way of grammatical errors either - so well done.

Definitely looking forward to settling down to a night of reading all about the Sisterhood.

(And no, I've no affiliation or connection with the writer - I merely take pleasure in reading both a well-written and potentially sexy story)

Thank you Chris7sw you are extremely kind! I am indeed an unrepentant slow-burner. There is a lot of scene-setting in my stories, and in this one especially because it is so long. I am really glad that you feel inspired to read on all the same. In case you or anyone else reading this is wondering: The first bit of actual S E C K S comes in chapter 3!

Also, I realize I should have linked this earlier, but I have also written a short chapter guide to help eager readers (or re-readers) find the chapters that will best float their boat: https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/pickleherring/46750/Sisterhood-Initiation/135309/Chapter-46/Appendix-Chapter-guides

Nice start !