All Comments on 'Sisters Ch. 10'

Your mistakes are getting worse and do spoil the story "Anyway, Dawn foolishly decided to brag. She told me she had gotten you to fuck her" followed by "That should be easy. You know we haven't done it and Dawn, well, you've got to be kidding." I hated lying to her but telling her I'd fucked Dawn too didn't seem right. Still, I knew at some point I'd have to tell her.

With both those conversations between the same two people just 4 paragraphs apart. Don't you read over the story before you publish it?