All Comments on 'Sisters Ch. 12'

I love it that you keep Sam so simple. He is learning about women. Please keep this story going for many more chapters.

But you're wrong about one thing! Shaved pussies do not smell or taste stronger or better! As a matter of fact they taste sorta bland compared to the same pussy before it was shaved! Pussy hair absorbs the tastes and smells of the pussy and it is like adding a spicy sauce to a bland meal! I just happen to love naturally hairy pusses and asses!!!

we have found out a lot about everyone, except Dawn - she is like this predator just off stage who comes in and attacks, then leaves for another episode.

is there more to her? one surprise has been she was still a virgin - which Sam has not mentioned to anyone yet. how does she really feel about Sam? why does she act the way she does?

the others we have a good idea why they do what they do, and how they feel about Sam, and some backstory.

there are some inconsistancies durring all the chapters but over all it's a great read. I do hope to read more chapters soon.

boring, too much talking, inconsistencies galore, dude has no balls. this is "chick flick" material. its like watching the entire movie Swordfish for the 5 seconds of HBerry nudity: a waste of time

Well I was finding them interesting but it seems you cant remember your story line and keep contradicting stuff you have already written. Here Sam tells Anne about him and Dawn and "nobody else knows" but in the previous story he discussed it TWICE with Cathy. The grammer and spelling seems to be getting worse with the word "would" several times being used where it should be "wouldn't". I don't think I need to read any more of your stories,

Or is a 'grammer' something I am as yet unaware of?

Or perhaps its an obscure verb?

'We were grammering in the shallows of our minds' for example

...Mancelt.;)

This is getting tedious.