All Comments on 'Sister's Introduction to Nudism Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Can't wait!

It just keeps getting better and better!

jingojingoabout 13 years ago
Unbelievable!

I just don't know how you are maintaining such an incredibly high and extremely arousing standard. This series truly is a classic of erotica - absolutely wonderful.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 13 years ago
I've got to agree, you have a great story here

And no actual sex between the two main characters. Amazing story. You said this was true didn't you?

NemlepNemlepabout 13 years ago
Wonderful

You just brought in a new character (Brian) and with so many different characters you still keep everything moving along so well. I am so looking forward to what else you have in store ... considering Moira hasn't had her tantric session yet :) Keep up the great work !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
amazing writing

Your level of writing has me convinced you must be a published author who enjoys writing sex stories anonymously.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
great storie

this is a storie that is hard to not read all thay when the next page comes up. look forward to the next part.

MeToo2MeToo2about 13 years ago

Keep going ... keep going!!!

BTW, would love to see all those pics they are taking LOL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Amazing.

Great story, do keep it going. Still so much potential. One of the best E&V stories in years.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
It's nice

I'ts nice that Karen has a son. This is a good mother and son incest in the future. And would be nice if Tim also has a daughter. The cousins would have sex first then their parents caught them having intercourse when they are in a nudist camp. But first Tim and Karen has to have intercourse first.

ErotonautErotonautabout 13 years ago
Rude, nude -- but not lewd

Unlike the previous commentator, I'd rather this story didn't take Tim and Karen further. Wanking in front of your sister is one thing, wanking onto her is another -- and fucking her is taking one step too far. Obviously, it's your story and you can steer it wherever you wish, but that's my personal preference.<br>

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With the vacation drawing to a close, I really hope you keep the characters alive, perhaps with a look at Tim & his wife's soft swings (has she been behaving herself whilst on that business trip?), or Karen's life when she returns to James (will she tell him what she's been up to?). This is without any doubt one of the best-written serials on this site, and I'd regret saying goodbye to your cast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

This is by far the greatest story written which keep everyone's interest. But Please can we post the next chapters quicker? It has been day's since the last chapter been submitted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

When the next chapter. Can't wait to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Looking every day for the next instalment of the best series of stories ever

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
MORE

hey man great stories, keep it up and lets get a new chapter going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great Story!

I have never commented on a Literotica story before, but I must admit that I have never read such a well written, erotic and excruciatingly prolonged story. I am checking every day to see if you have finshed the next chapter. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Forever

Like it's been forever since the last chapter. Great story line. Can't wait to read more. Just love it. Please, please, please, post more chapters.

Thank you.

jasperscribblerjasperscribblerabout 13 years ago
Duuude, we're dying out here

Hope you weren't at seaside when some of that tsunami wave got down your way. Otherwise, you have us totally hooked on this story, which imposes an obligation to finish it. Do I have to come down there and pull a Kathy Bates on you?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wow! Amazing

Eagerly waiting for the next parts...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
HURRY

HURRY WITH CHAPTER 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Please, please, please

Give another story, please?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great elements

It is so rare to encounter a story that has all the elements I enjoy: grammatical and literate; portrays recognizable three dimensional characters in a human setting; nudism; incest; exhibitionism; voyeurism; kindness; humor; and solid story writing skills building to engaging climaxes in every chapter.

In short, well done. Please give us another 10 chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
we are waiting

please go on

Thomas DrablézienThomas Drablézienabout 13 years ago
I love this series!

I've had a bit of trouble logging in and didn't want to leave an 'Anonymous' comment so now that I'm back....

Think this is a great series. I love the way that you re revealing your characters slowly and naturally, as well as building up the story and the sex scenes. One can find real empathy with your protagonists, they are much more than cardboard cut-outs with genitals as is the way with so much 'erotic literature.'

Keep up the good work I am looking forward to reading more about this group of sexy naturists :)

Tom D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
i wish for more

i hope you havnot been found out by owners of the camp.they would not like being seen as swingers resort.i have been to this place & have never seen anything like this.but have enjoyed the story so far .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Amazing

This story is so amazing it's first I've ever commented on but I check back daily and chapter 11 is still AWOL. Please say it's on the way

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
chapter 11

your story has kept me coming back everyday. Its one of the best i have read but WHATS UPPPPP WHERES CHAPTER 11 serious this is a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Like all the others I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall....please keep up the great work. It's the best I've read in a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Where is chapter 11

Where is chapter 11

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I'm hooked.

I need chapter 11!

DarkNetDarkNetabout 13 years ago
And

I hope you are working on the outline for chapter 22.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

plz continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Or at least comment to let us know you are reading the feedback ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Waiting for the next 10 stories!

Quit wanking off and write the next ones!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

We are all patiently waiting for the next chapter. Bring it on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
next?

Hey, come on, such a good story cannot end there

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Please continue the story.

Great erotica, really hope you will continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
This is one of the best stories.

We know this place, as we are Nude Nomads in a van traveling Aus. It is so easy to make friends of nudist's much easier than textile's

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I'm hooked on this

Love this story. Please continue it. Would love to read more.

mrutherfordmrutherfordabout 13 years ago
waiting

Please when's the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Can't wait

Great story , nice build up

Don't stop

Joe C

jasperscribblerjasperscribblerabout 13 years ago
Dang it dude!

You can't leave us dangling like this, like a limp dick in one of those nightmares about taking a school test you didn't know about and show up for having forgotten to dress after your shower.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Been a couple of months and still wondering what tomorrow is going to bring.

Hope you are safe and just busy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Number 11?

Ok, your good. Now I need # 11

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
where are you?

lots of stories really quick of great quality and then you vanish?

AllosaurusRexAllosaurusRexalmost 13 years ago
Great story

So far, but can we have more of this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

need the next chapter please please please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Bush

Sorry Karen shaved her pussy.A woman with a good full hairy pussy is still a turn on.Nothing like letting a load go in her bush, and clean up the next day,.Hope she grows it back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
What happened?

You were pumping out chapters left and right and then all of a sudden nothing. What happened? Where are you? Eager readers want to know how this story concludes.

yonekhadvashyonekhadvashalmost 13 years ago
Great story! Please continue. We can't wait long...

Just the way I like it.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great story goes pear shaped

Was greatly enjoying this story and then you had to repeat earlier chapters for 9 and 10. what a let down. your out of my favourites.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Please let us know if you're done so we won't keep coming back to look. This was a great series and I know many were enjoying it!

Rucker15aRucker15aalmost 13 years ago
Well.......

I think maybe his sister found out he wrote this story LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Missing you

Hope you are OK, looking forwards to how this set of stories can carry on

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sister's Introduction to Nudism - Ch 10

As I said earlier - you're getting better and better, sort of like wine, sort of like a pussy, (woman or man), and I would like that you just keep up the good work. - Bob

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
a great story

waiting curiously for remaining story. when?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Number 11

Well written; great series; another plea for number 11 and 12, 13 etc!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
dear please complete the story

hey dear..story was awesome....please complete it fully as soon as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What happens next?

waiting eagrly.

PoutineFanPoutineFanover 12 years ago
Very nice :)

I just finished the whole story, and wanted to thank you for sharing. I like how you've actually been concentrating on the characters rather than making this an outright wank story. Good characterization always makes for a better story :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

more its a great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Hey! Why you have not complete such wonderful story? I eagerly waiting for the next chapter and hope many others are also waiting.

dutchpantyraiderdutchpantyraiderover 12 years ago
what happened the next sunday?

I read a wonderful story last spring, and now I'm still waiting to read how it ends... Your story is worth further elaboration, but at least do us the favour to write down what happened the next sunday!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Where is the rest of the story???

Wonderful story, Not just a Wank tale. But where is the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Well done!!!

Hope you are well and not involved in any of the problems in the land down under. Thank you for the eloquent stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

where are you dear? i am eager to finish this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

please complete the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
PLEASE FINISH!!!

this story is amazing! the characters the camp the events you have made them all so real! wether or not these events actually took place you are a gifted writer and your style is amazing. please at least write a closing chapter so we can know what happens!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i am still to cum

ohh plz friend its not fare u should complete the story man..think how many could get setisfied and i am still to cum...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Awesome!

Great story line..... Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

HEY... We all waiting.... I have read it over and over.... Please add more .... this is one of my favourites

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
COME ON!

it is FANTASTIC! you can't end there. I don't know if its been finished or not but you have to continue, please, i would happily pay for it to finish

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please continue

I also will join the crowd and request more--this is spectacular. And it needs a proper ending! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
continue please

my title says it all

photo100photo100about 12 years ago
At least 1 more chapter required

As with many others I would like to ask for more chapters on the story, I only found your stories yesterday, but I have now read all 10, they are very good and I require more,

Hope you find the time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
someone else?

Can someone else finish this series then? It's been over a year!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
don't stop now

I couldn't stop read all the way to 10 keep it going great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

I likes the slow pace, and the realistic characters. The setting is well imagined or reported. I read all ten episodes in a single session, very sexy and natural. Wish there were more episodes so that I could learn what else happened. Especially the narrator and his brave sister.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Best series yet

This is the best series I've read on here yet I have it book marked cant wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Waiting for next part....

Best story i read.... just waiting for the next part...

Dear Author,

Pls... let us enjoy the next part(s).

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great flow

Can anyone finish this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
hi

hi dear it is a wonderful story I like it very much

please update it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Like Stroy

Enjoyed series very much, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
hi dear

please update the story it is wonderful waiting four your updates

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Best Story on Site

Wow what a great story and writer, and I hope there are more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
We still waiting

Very good story...

..... please continue

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
I don't think that you will ever finish this.

If you do you will probably drag it through a couple more chapters without consummating their sex act. Long and slow, tedious and non-fulfilling. I just checked the last chapter this time. Too much BS for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
BESt story ever!

One of the best written stories on literotica or anywhere. Hopefully you have time to continue it. We all are truly dying to hear more. I think that's because there is something for everyone and anybody can relate. For my part, as a guy with a big butt sister, I would love to take her to a nudist camp and hangout for two weeks watching her having sexy fun while I secretly lusted after her voluptuous body. I find it especially hot that Tims cum on Karen twice now without her entirely realizing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Next...?

Would love to read the next installment in this series...

NudieNomadsNudieNomadsover 9 years ago

Really enjoyed it and would love to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
want more

Best story I ever read,

Where is next part pls tell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You are a jerk

I cant believe you woukd write such an engrossing story and then leave us hanging. FOR YEARS. Not cool dick head. Not cool at all

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Another few Chapters--or A New Story

Loved it

You made a rather unfulfilled conclusion. This can be resolved by either writing a few more chapters--or, by starting a new episode with this story as a part of the "back story" wherein you tie up some loose ends.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Lovely story

One of the best stories on Literotica, reads like it is for real, love the next installment lest there was regrets on Sunday Morning.

taniwha60taniwha60almost 9 years ago
Loved the story--as far as it got!

Okay Please finish the story for us. It looks to me a if there are nearly 100 of us waiting for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nudist love story...of horny couples

Hope you continue your story ...of sis and bro learning to Enjoy their own nudist times together, to share their firsts with each other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Brother and Sister Love

A really nice story of nudism and how wonderfully it bonds friends and brothers and sisters.

reader_3634reader_3634over 8 years ago
I would love the rest of the story

but, unfortunately, after 4 years we have to accept it isn't going to happen. Pity - it was a great story and well told until it finished just a little early. I still give it 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please more!

I really enjoyed the story. Wish it would continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Country of Setting and shop terminology.

The story is obviously set in the Australian Bush somewhere west of Sydney and quite likely in relatively close proximity to the Blue Mountains. However I did notice a very unusual terminology (for Australia, but in regular use in America). The term used was Store Clerk. Here in Australia the most usual term is Shop Assistant or Attendant.

TheSweeterTheWineTheSweeterTheWineabout 8 years ago
Please

Make like Spinal Tap and crank this up to 11.

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