by Ozsunlover
I just don't know how you are maintaining such an incredibly high and extremely arousing standard. This series truly is a classic of erotica - absolutely wonderful.
And no actual sex between the two main characters. Amazing story. You said this was true didn't you?
You just brought in a new character (Brian) and with so many different characters you still keep everything moving along so well. I am so looking forward to what else you have in store ... considering Moira hasn't had her tantric session yet :) Keep up the great work !!
Your level of writing has me convinced you must be a published author who enjoys writing sex stories anonymously.
this is a storie that is hard to not read all thay when the next page comes up. look forward to the next part.
Keep going ... keep going!!!
BTW, would love to see all those pics they are taking LOL
Great story, do keep it going. Still so much potential. One of the best E&V stories in years.
I'ts nice that Karen has a son. This is a good mother and son incest in the future. And would be nice if Tim also has a daughter. The cousins would have sex first then their parents caught them having intercourse when they are in a nudist camp. But first Tim and Karen has to have intercourse first.
Unlike the previous commentator, I'd rather this story didn't take Tim and Karen further. Wanking in front of your sister is one thing, wanking onto her is another -- and fucking her is taking one step too far. Obviously, it's your story and you can steer it wherever you wish, but that's my personal preference.<br>
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With the vacation drawing to a close, I really hope you keep the characters alive, perhaps with a look at Tim & his wife's soft swings (has she been behaving herself whilst on that business trip?), or Karen's life when she returns to James (will she tell him what she's been up to?). This is without any doubt one of the best-written serials on this site, and I'd regret saying goodbye to your cast.
This is by far the greatest story written which keep everyone's interest. But Please can we post the next chapters quicker? It has been day's since the last chapter been submitted.
Looking every day for the next instalment of the best series of stories ever
I have never commented on a Literotica story before, but I must admit that I have never read such a well written, erotic and excruciatingly prolonged story. I am checking every day to see if you have finshed the next chapter. Good job!
Like it's been forever since the last chapter. Great story line. Can't wait to read more. Just love it. Please, please, please, post more chapters.
Thank you.
Hope you weren't at seaside when some of that tsunami wave got down your way. Otherwise, you have us totally hooked on this story, which imposes an obligation to finish it. Do I have to come down there and pull a Kathy Bates on you?
HURRY WITH CHAPTER 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It is so rare to encounter a story that has all the elements I enjoy: grammatical and literate; portrays recognizable three dimensional characters in a human setting; nudism; incest; exhibitionism; voyeurism; kindness; humor; and solid story writing skills building to engaging climaxes in every chapter.
In short, well done. Please give us another 10 chapters.
I've had a bit of trouble logging in and didn't want to leave an 'Anonymous' comment so now that I'm back....
Think this is a great series. I love the way that you re revealing your characters slowly and naturally, as well as building up the story and the sex scenes. One can find real empathy with your protagonists, they are much more than cardboard cut-outs with genitals as is the way with so much 'erotic literature.'
Keep up the good work I am looking forward to reading more about this group of sexy naturists :)
Tom D
i hope you havnot been found out by owners of the camp.they would not like being seen as swingers resort.i have been to this place & have never seen anything like this.but have enjoyed the story so far .
This story is so amazing it's first I've ever commented on but I check back daily and chapter 11 is still AWOL. Please say it's on the way
your story has kept me coming back everyday. Its one of the best i have read but WHATS UPPPPP WHERES CHAPTER 11 serious this is a great story.
Like all the others I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall....please keep up the great work. It's the best I've read in a long time.
Quit wanking off and write the next ones!
We know this place, as we are Nude Nomads in a van traveling Aus. It is so easy to make friends of nudist's much easier than textile's
Love this story. Please continue it. Would love to read more.
You can't leave us dangling like this, like a limp dick in one of those nightmares about taking a school test you didn't know about and show up for having forgotten to dress after your shower.
Been a couple of months and still wondering what tomorrow is going to bring.
Hope you are safe and just busy.
lots of stories really quick of great quality and then you vanish?
Sorry Karen shaved her pussy.A woman with a good full hairy pussy is still a turn on.Nothing like letting a load go in her bush, and clean up the next day,.Hope she grows it back.
You were pumping out chapters left and right and then all of a sudden nothing. What happened? Where are you? Eager readers want to know how this story concludes.
Just the way I like it.
Thank you.
Was greatly enjoying this story and then you had to repeat earlier chapters for 9 and 10. what a let down. your out of my favourites.
Please let us know if you're done so we won't keep coming back to look. This was a great series and I know many were enjoying it!
Hope you are OK, looking forwards to how this set of stories can carry on
As I said earlier - you're getting better and better, sort of like wine, sort of like a pussy, (woman or man), and I would like that you just keep up the good work. - Bob
Well written; great series; another plea for number 11 and 12, 13 etc!!
hey dear..story was awesome....please complete it fully as soon as possible.
I just finished the whole story, and wanted to thank you for sharing. I like how you've actually been concentrating on the characters rather than making this an outright wank story. Good characterization always makes for a better story :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hey! Why you have not complete such wonderful story? I eagerly waiting for the next chapter and hope many others are also waiting.
I read a wonderful story last spring, and now I'm still waiting to read how it ends... Your story is worth further elaboration, but at least do us the favour to write down what happened the next sunday!
Wonderful story, Not just a Wank tale. But where is the ending.
Hope you are well and not involved in any of the problems in the land down under. Thank you for the eloquent stories.
this story is amazing! the characters the camp the events you have made them all so real! wether or not these events actually took place you are a gifted writer and your style is amazing. please at least write a closing chapter so we can know what happens!!!
ohh plz friend its not fare u should complete the story man..think how many could get setisfied and i am still to cum...
HEY... We all waiting.... I have read it over and over.... Please add more .... this is one of my favourites
it is FANTASTIC! you can't end there. I don't know if its been finished or not but you have to continue, please, i would happily pay for it to finish
I also will join the crowd and request more--this is spectacular. And it needs a proper ending! :)
As with many others I would like to ask for more chapters on the story, I only found your stories yesterday, but I have now read all 10, they are very good and I require more,
Hope you find the time
Can someone else finish this series then? It's been over a year!
I couldn't stop read all the way to 10 keep it going great read
I likes the slow pace, and the realistic characters. The setting is well imagined or reported. I read all ten episodes in a single session, very sexy and natural. Wish there were more episodes so that I could learn what else happened. Especially the narrator and his brave sister.
This is the best series I've read on here yet I have it book marked cant wait for the next chapter
Best story i read.... just waiting for the next part...
Dear Author,
Pls... let us enjoy the next part(s).
please update the story it is wonderful waiting four your updates
Wow what a great story and writer, and I hope there are more chapters.
If you do you will probably drag it through a couple more chapters without consummating their sex act. Long and slow, tedious and non-fulfilling. I just checked the last chapter this time. Too much BS for me.
One of the best written stories on literotica or anywhere. Hopefully you have time to continue it. We all are truly dying to hear more. I think that's because there is something for everyone and anybody can relate. For my part, as a guy with a big butt sister, I would love to take her to a nudist camp and hangout for two weeks watching her having sexy fun while I secretly lusted after her voluptuous body. I find it especially hot that Tims cum on Karen twice now without her entirely realizing it.
I cant believe you woukd write such an engrossing story and then leave us hanging. FOR YEARS. Not cool dick head. Not cool at all
Loved it
You made a rather unfulfilled conclusion. This can be resolved by either writing a few more chapters--or, by starting a new episode with this story as a part of the "back story" wherein you tie up some loose ends.
One of the best stories on Literotica, reads like it is for real, love the next installment lest there was regrets on Sunday Morning.
Okay Please finish the story for us. It looks to me a if there are nearly 100 of us waiting for more.
Hope you continue your story ...of sis and bro learning to Enjoy their own nudist times together, to share their firsts with each other.
A really nice story of nudism and how wonderfully it bonds friends and brothers and sisters.
but, unfortunately, after 4 years we have to accept it isn't going to happen. Pity - it was a great story and well told until it finished just a little early. I still give it 5*
The story is obviously set in the Australian Bush somewhere west of Sydney and quite likely in relatively close proximity to the Blue Mountains. However I did notice a very unusual terminology (for Australia, but in regular use in America). The term used was Store Clerk. Here in Australia the most usual term is Shop Assistant or Attendant.