by Soebek110
Once again you write a good story with some great sex. I was wondering when the first threesome would be, and now I know. Room for another though, since this one was perhaps "incomplete" :p
A great piece of work. Well imagined, well written, well paced, with an original plot, good prose and dialogue. The only (rare and minor) errors are spelling mistakes of a "phonetic" nature (e.g. hear instead of here). All in all, well above average. Keep it up!