All Comments on 'Sitting on Dad's Lap Ch. 03: Kelli Ups the Ante'

This series is going from decent to worse. Forst 1 was great, second ok and this one is poor. Going off the plot somewhat with inventing brothers and identical triplets. Come on

I like how this story is going and it makes me cum every chapter. I can’t wait for there to be a big family gangbang

Evidently you didn't read the first chapter or didn't read it very well. At the beginning of the chapter -- the story, really -- it's clearly stated, "Even though there were almost 7 years and three brothers between them, they always competed for everything."

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Having misgivings about them being identical triplets is a matter of preference, but they were NOT invented in this chapter. It's not Salacious_Scribe's problem you can't read.

I know it's fantasy, but still not very realistic. Plot is all over the place........

I can see this is gonna go downhill in future chapters and has already started now. The idea of a giant family orgy feels weird, I prefer just the father with his daughters rather than sons and daughters husband and crap being with all the women of the family.

It has been great so far, but when I started the series, I was expecting F/D, F/D/D and the inclusion of the mother was a welcome possibility. But it seems that having the boys with the girlfriend and mom wanting to sleep with all the boys as well as Dave, is just clusterfucking the whole situation. You mentioned your initial goal was to spin the 'sitting on lap' trope, well you succeeded and brilliantly as well, I might add.

I may be the only one but, if you ended it with only the currently intimate characters, then it would have been great. Maybe if you separated this upcoming plot into another story, it would also have done well on its own. I think including it in the current story is just going to detract from the amazing story you already have and turn it into a fuckfest.

Well done on the story so far, but I think I'll be stopping at this chapter.

I really liked chapter 1 and 3 a lot. Chapter 2 was good, but I like the daughter/dad thing better. Keep it up.

I just sat here and read all 3 chapters so far and I thi k it is very well done, it has a good mix of story and just plan erotica. Looking forward to chapter 4 :)

I have to admit that Ch 1 was my favorite & mom finding out was ok...but Ch 3 left me scratching my head...yes the intro was good & fucking the daughter up the azzzzz was hot. But going off the rails describing the 3 brothers & this spa treatment in the last half of Ch 3 really let me down.....hoping this gets back to father, daughter & daughter.....

I say son, you gettin outta hand.

I just read all three chapters in a row and I am SOAKING. Please come up with the rest of the chapters too, I'm begging.

Great story line! I can hardly wait for the next installments!

Will Dave and Ashlynn hookup ! Dad and his Daughters in a Threesome , These and other Question will be answered in the next Chapter .

More chapters, please.

More please! I have to know what happens next with this naughty family

good series. hopefully it will continue?

You have to keep this series going!!!!!

Please keep this series going!! There's so much more that we NEED to know!

Thank you for what you've written so far!

Oh wow! What a family.

I need more!! Keep this going. I’m ready for a family gang bang! At least mom and the triplets filling every hole!

Any daughters wanna fantasize riding daddyys cock. 4706464964

just love it, pliss continue

Great series! Love how open and horny literally everyone is haha fun fantasy world

I have to say this whole series is well thought and well written, although thematically didn't click with me. My fav is part 1, because stories of an an incest in moving car with oblivious driver is definitely one of my kinks.

Please continue the story it reads very well with good story in addition to good sex.

How does the weekend turn out? Inquiri g minds and all that... I look forward to reading g the rest of the story!