by RonEhrs
For the life of me I can’t understand why a writer would inject politics into a story, especially in the current political environment. It didn’t enhance or clarify the story in any way and is certain to alienate readers on either side.
Amazing story, wish you hadn't capped it off, more chapters would have been great to read.
Hate the ending. What a waste of time to get all hopeful just to have sad ending. I wish writers would realize that life sucks bad enough in real life and that we read these stories to feel happy about something even if it’s just fantasy and for a little while feel happy about something.
A lovley story spoiled by a very crap ending.
Readers much preferre a happy ending like she gets pregnent the start iving together
weird ending.. u should write kdramas, they love shitty endings.. 3/5 end ruined it..
" I was waiting to see the soft brown hair of her bush appear. But as I kept going, I realized there was something different. There were no hairs at all. Finally, I got to her mound and her pussy, and everything was bare." NO!!!
I've never seen the word "BEAUTIFUL" used so much. At times it was almost every other word. And I have never heard any man use the word "BEAUTIFUL" in describing how good something or someone felt. The story would have been a lot better without using the word beautiful so many times. Otherwise, it was a pretty good story.