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Click hereI kissed the back of his neck, giving a soft bite as I climaxed. I knew I didn't cum nearly as much as he did, but holy fuck it felt amazing.
I rolled my older lover on to his back, to cuddle in his arms. He felt warm, comforting, strong. But he was very quiet. "Val, you ok?"
I would have assumed he was having a seizure, except for the odd look of calm. This wasn't pain, this was a sudden numbness.
Val reached his hand to my shoulder, patting my back in what I can only assume was meant as an act of comfort. But his movement was erratic. "I-I think I need to go to the hospital."
Fuck! It took me a few seconds to find the strength to sit up. I wanted to cry, to scream. Yeah, great job, Jack-off! You're not a doctor, you're just a fucking party-boy slut.
I managed to calm my breath, and clear my mind enough to locate the landline phone. I dialed 911, explaining the situation to the operator; unresponsive patient, possible heart attack or stroke. Wait no, he's not unresponsive. Oh well, better to ask for more help.
I saw there was an option to call the upper floor (so Kat would not completely freak out when the ambulance arrived.) But I decided against it. Knowing my dumb-ass self, I would likely manage to disconnect the 911 call.
I waited until the ambulance arrived, which took only a few minutes.
In the chaos, I got the hell out of that house without even saying goodbye. Maybe I would go back to Seattle, maybe I would just keep walking until I disappeared into the Pacific ocean. Either way, Val would be better off without me.
Good story, the first and second part are a very nice job of character development,, but what the HELL? You cannot end the story the way you left everything hanging at the end of chapter two..
You've got Kat with lust and love and affection issues. you have a sick patient that has gone to the hospital. And to be frank, I would not have written that Jack left and wandered off.. Seriously? yes he felt like HE caused the 'heart attack' or whatever Val was experiencing, but; Just WHAT could Jack have done to change the inevitable attack? Try to interrupt Val and his self-medication?
I'd say that VAL only said he needed to go to the Hospital because he expected Jack to go with him. So Jack abandons VAL.. hmm hot right..
So lots to fix in chapters 3 and 4, at least.. This actually could be a great story,, With several possible endings..
DV19
Jeez Louise, wtf? I know Val is supposed to be basically dying, but damn, what you described at that locker made me cringe. So, just to make sure I am clear, this guy shot up some sort of opiod/cocaine (sp?) concoction into his thigh, then snorted more of said blend up his nose, the proceeded to smoke high-CBD weed from a vape pen all within the span of say...20 minutes. No wonder he needed an ambulance. Honestly, I am glad you wrote it like that, because any other scenario would sound absolutely bonkers.
I am liking the story, but please don't kill off everyone too soon 😊