All Comments on 'Skin on Skin'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Damn that was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please write more about Danny and Ty! You've given them a good start now go on with their romance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can’t wait to hear more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please write either in past or present tense, not both! I assume it was done to try and make the sex scene feel more immediate, but it just disrupts the pace of the scene. It's a shame because the story was hot but the tense switch threw me off just when things were getting good :(

Lars420Lars4209 months ago

That was hot as fuck dude !

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Young guy, putting his fantasies and past experiences into arousing stories, using a range of sexy characters to do so.