I loved the story! 1 criticism: Grammar & spelling. At times I found myself very distracted because of a word misspelled or the grammar. Other than that 2 thumbs up! ππ
Married man living in Yorkshire, senior manager by day, freak by night. My stories are all written for Ladies! They are all real people that have asked me to document their fantasies and desires. Most of the story direction is their request. If you want me to write yours, g...