All Comments on 'Slap!'

Definitely one of my favorites! Great job!

You might like to read through some 'real' BDSM sites, most state that the face is off limits, there are too many delicate bones and tissue in the face to sustain any trauma. Even slight trauma can result in retinal detachment. Usually when the face is slapped in a story, there is the point where I stop reading and leave a 1* But kept reading this one, hoping that you can somehow redeem your character and the punishment does not escalate into abuse.

lucky girl....can i be next? ;-)