by Gamblnluck
I enjoy the setup, and the world is interesting. That said, I personally have no interest in gay male sex, so the stuff with Chad loses me.
thinking that the next chapter is up ... BUT NO LUCK ... nothing yet. for sure l'll keep lookin'
Your writing was well crafted, very enjoyable storyline. thank you!
The conceit of the main character turning the lesbians inside out is a joke. I don't believe that Derek was ever depicted as such a stud earlier, and he's what, 64? Ain't gonna happen.