All Comments on 'Slave Cassandra Pt. 02'

by amadeuserotic

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hmmm, cool

I wasn't into scat before, and my jury's still out. But this was told in such a sensual way, that I actually liked it. A great deal. Good writing. Keep it up.

amadeuseroticamadeuseroticover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your feedback

As I mentioned at the end, suggestions from readers on what Cassandra should do next are welcome. In this way, she would become a slave to the audience.

MetalloverMetalloveralmost 6 years ago

Piss would be good, but it's not really as nasty a fetish as scat, which means you gotta be clever and ingenious to avoid anticlimax. But using her hair would definitely be better than clothes. I love it when a pretty girl surrenders her beautiful hair to pee

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very nice!

It was well-told; a slut should always love her master and be a perfect submissive to him. If anything at all, I'd simply request a bit more ah, 'internalization' of the master's bodily wastes, eagerly eating every morsel and describing her pride with her ever- increasing fullness, n'est-ce pas? Just a thought. Loved the graphic descriptions of the slave's love and adoration for not just the master but also the filth he produces for her meal and beverage. One of the very best. Keep writing!

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