All Comments on 'Slave Girl Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I love the theme of the story and would love to read more chapters although I confess I wouldn't need hypnosis giggle

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Thanks.

Mistress in the green dress, hypnotize me and make me suck a cock. PLEASE! And if I can make a request make it a black man. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I totally agree, I wouldn't need hypnosis and agree again please make it big and the blacker the better, I'm already salivating.more please soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
What next

Did Speph go what slave girl actALLY DON'T

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very interesting

Love the concept and you have skill, both the overall setup, the bits preceding outright sex and the sex itself meshed perfectly together to make for a very sexy read. I don't usually like blowjob scenes but I sure liked this one.

Keep up the good work and I hope we see pt 2 soon ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More personal

Did one sucking cock become a slave girl. I would love the be hypnosis and a slave girl

milkyrosemilkyrosealmost 5 years ago
;)

i'd love it if you'd finish this! ;)

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 5 years ago
i liked this too

this is going to get good with more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More chapter

Did Steph suck more dick to become a better slave girl.if I were hypnosis I would like to have my missitess teach more about cock and getting me ready for a cock to be push up my pussy

daveflydaveflyabout 3 years ago

god i want to be stephen/ steffine , i want to become a feminized sex slave ❤️❤️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why wouldn't Brian go get help and have the bitch arrested? Oh, he would. Big hole in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Interesting premise for a fictional story, but completely unrealistic. A hypnotized person remains conscious. Also, you cannot be hypnotized against your will.

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