All Comments on 'Slave Grading - The I Investigates Ch. 02'

This story is developing nicely and I am looking forward to the next chapter to see where you take us. This has the potential to be a great story. Keep up the great work

What a great story so far! I love that you are balancing your description of what is happening physically and psychologically. Looking forward to seeing her gradual transition into slavery continue.

Let the plot thicken as it proceeds in the next chapter or even further! Have enjoyed the first two chapters immensely!

This is a fantastic story, very well written! I hope you continue it soon.

The Intruder

A reporter invades an opulent DOB/Sub training club for the inside story. It's an interesting concept, but I don't see the essential conflict between exuding self confidence and fear of discovery which would accompany such an insertion. An undercover operative must play along with the host. How absorbed does theinvestigator become a part of the target? Still Tammy's quest is a fascinating undertaking