All Comments on 'Slave of Desire Ch. 02'

by cellophanesmile

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Marines_Lady_15Marines_Lady_15almost 17 years ago
Ooo, nice*

I justread these two back to back! Are you going to continue it? or will it just be these two chapters?

oldwinooldwinoalmost 17 years ago
The End?

Hope this isn't the end. Felt the parts were a little rushed. Wish they were longer. Solid fives both. Not enough peroid stories on Lit.

ZigPupZigPupabout 13 years ago
ehh

idk i mean its good. but i just wouldn't forgive him so quickly. he loves her? great! but she was JUST gang molested with his approval. i would be pissed for at least a week. probably more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
well....

Your stories are good, but I don't like how you make you characters fall in love and forgive the person who raped them.

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