All Comments on 'Slave Party'

by biggie79uk

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mioelcidmioelcidalmost 4 years ago
if it's the beginong of somthimg ...

If it has finished, bad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

time to get rid of the whore he calls a wife didn't deserved to be treated like that lots of better women around than that slut

BigDee44BigDee44over 3 years ago

The slaves need to watch Spartacus!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I'd like to be a slave at that party

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great potential but

This had awesome potential... but it’s as if you spent 5 hours writing the build up, and three minutes writing the end.

You build up the fear of Donna... great, but miss the chance to explain why. And the consequences. You built tension between Joe and his co-worker being there, but again, leave it hanging.

So, so close... yet so far.

GcoachGGcoachGalmost 3 years ago

There should be soooooooo much more to this story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

lovely story,indeed

cdCindy1cdCindy13 months ago

This story is a great start. I would love to be Joe and serve all the buyers. I would love for my co-workers and former bosses to see me naked, especially my small pencil dick.

Please continue this story and the adventures of Joe, his wife, co-worker Autumn and former boss Donna.

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I enjoy writing these stories about my husband. He enjoys the parts that are real. The parts of the stories that seem really cruel are fantasy.