by biggie79uk
time to get rid of the whore he calls a wife didn't deserved to be treated like that lots of better women around than that slut
This had awesome potential... but it’s as if you spent 5 hours writing the build up, and three minutes writing the end.
You build up the fear of Donna... great, but miss the chance to explain why. And the consequences. You built tension between Joe and his co-worker being there, but again, leave it hanging.
So, so close... yet so far.
This story is a great start. I would love to be Joe and serve all the buyers. I would love for my co-workers and former bosses to see me naked, especially my small pencil dick.
Please continue this story and the adventures of Joe, his wife, co-worker Autumn and former boss Donna.