All Comments on 'Slave Shorts: The Spiral Downwards'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow that story was worth the wait!

alphafallenboysalphafallenboysabout 1 year agoAuthor

Hello Anonymous. Thanks for your comments. I think comments are worth more than the scores on here. I am glad i enjoyed it. I have a few stories I am writing and editing etc at the moment. Unfortunately the wait has been to covid and not being able to write, whilst like that. Sorry for the delay.

AnadrielAnadrielabout 1 year ago

More🙏🏻 - I love this world, it’s like Ancient Rome crossed with a sci-fi dystopian world. But I like that it always sticks to its own rules and has intricate hierarchies & social structures. Weakness is despised & preyed upon but also catered to. I’d love to see some Ai art of this world & scenes.

Maybe when they unchain it to do lewd stuff 😌🥰

Anna

alphafallenboysalphafallenboysabout 1 year agoAuthor

Anadriel Thanks for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it. Don't worry there is more coming. Next week the next instalment of Marcus decent. However, the other characters will be visited again and others will be added overtime. I think Slave Shorts is something i will continue writing. Maybe an actual full novel one day. IDK

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Often I write stories about demons and witchcraft. My stories are mostly gay sex or erotic slavery. I write about morphing and sub humans. A lot of fantasy/Sci-fi too, and I Love BDSM.

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