All Comments on 'Slave -- The Cafe'

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XantuXantuabout 16 years ago
This caught my attention

It had a nice level of intensity, but there needs to be more. Write more please. xantu

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
AWESOME!

Definitely should be following chapters to this one..

Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
he kissed her with his heart...

lord i loved that line.this super story just kept hitting many of my hot buttons. actually this is one of my favorite fantasy's. bless you for writing it down. hope i read more of these two. he is so hot and she is so willing.yummy.peace brooklyn

geekgurl2000geekgurl2000over 15 years ago
linked from FetLife

This was posted in a discussion forum so naturally, i had to check it out. Hot! This is the sort of thing that I'd probably enjoy.

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