All Comments on 'Slave to the CEO Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story is bland. It's supposed to be a noncon story but utterly fails to sell it. As the previous commenter in the previous chapter said, one of the victims could just decide to commit murder while these guys sleep. A key aspect to making a noncon story immersive is explaining why the victim doesn't just do that.

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