All Comments on 'Slave Unbound Ch. 10'

At this point, it seems like a series of short stories. I figure something is coming. I'm sure you will weave it all together. Good story,

I've worried a lot that writing it as I do, posting each chapter as I write it, causes me to think more like short story writing than as a true-to-form novel. I want my readers to feel like they get more than just 'another chapter' and try to make each chapter worth waiting for. That does cause me to potentially treat each chapter less like a 'chapter' and more like an 'episode'. While I did try to focus on making later chapters in my books more like parts of a larger whole, these earlier chapters are probably more-so 'episodic' than later ones.

Still, I fear that, even now, I try too hard to make each chapter 'worth the wait' and push them into being more like anthology than singular story.