Slaves of Set

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He only groaned in response, his fear and his vulnerability overcome in the excitement of our pledge, and I felt his cum burning into me, sealing our oaths , burning the truth of the promise into the dark of my interior. The feel of his spurting semen triggered my own orgasm, and I felt my cock spurt wetly, dripping down onto the bedclothes.

When he pulled out of me, his cock wet with his cum he smiled as he ordered me to clean it off. And when I returned my mouth to that soiled rod which had so often defiled me John told me for the first time since it had begun that he loved me.

So even in the savage dark there lingered the low flames of tenderness...

I am not sure...I am not sure that there is anything left to say. This has already gone on longer than I intended, what began as a breid sketch to be completed in a few furious hours has spiraled into a more detailed summary that has taken not one night but many to complete. And all of it in such absolute secrecy that it has become exhausting.

I would like to linger on those final days before Josie's return, I would like to offer them to you minute by minute, each delicious second and each sordid act. But I will not. I would like to offer you the full revelation of Sid's private mythology, to delve deep into Setian Heresy and the desert initiations of lost wars...but this is not the place, and there is no time left.

It is more important than all else that I reach at last the conclusion, which itself is no small thing. The finish never is.

I did not know the denouement had come until it was upon me. As I have said, I had lost track of all the days and I did not focus upon the signs at hand. I knew that any day my wife would return, but all the same I knew not when...

To be continued when circumstance allows...


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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

You have a gift, a creative mind and the ability to put it on paper. I like that you tell what each character is thinking. I do hope that you continue with the story. I want to see how the family deals with this impossible situation. I also hope you have other storylines hidden in your imagination. I appreciate the unusual.

wickedwicker10wickedwicker10over 3 years ago
not that I'm an expert...

Hey, so, I think you made some mistakes with this story, but I'm a new writer too, so I'd like to be constructive. You obviously read the Travels of Isabella Gardner and the whole Setian Underground thing, and as far as that goes I think you've made a good attempt. But I think you'd benefit from shorter installments and less abstraction. Don't rush to publish something. This is an erotic story site, so lean into that more than you do the Underground aspect of the work. Take this for what it's worth, and I really hope you stick with it and improve with the next installment.Good luck Brother ( or sister) whoever you are.

SunOceanSandSunOceanSandover 3 years ago

You could have told the story in one page!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
"To be continued when circumstance allows..."

11 Literotica pages (between 100 and 110 in Word) and this is STILL not done -- and there's no chapter number to warn this wasn't complete?

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Is it your own story or the readers you don't give a fuck about?

FamilyGuy1963FamilyGuy1963over 3 years ago

Too long, rambling and confusing.

I can only hope that there will be no continuation as threatened.

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