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All Comments on 'Sleep, Sex, and Sun'

by PerilEyes

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DorlaMoorehouseDorlaMoorehouseover 13 years ago
Fun!

An all-around fun story! Enjoyable to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Could use some serious editing...

Beyond that, not a bad read. Very erotic. I love the whole thing with the ice cream. Too bad she couldn't have had her turn with it. ;)

michchick98michchick98over 13 years ago
Nice read

I liked the story, but I wonder where does the exhibitionism come in if they're alone on the beach? Anyway, this was a fun story to read. Good luck in the contest.

PerilEyesPerilEyesover 13 years agoAuthor
Mistake realized

I meant to put Erotic Couplings. Oops! :)

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