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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Interesting concept

Probably needed a proof read. About the middle of the story is a scene with cum on the toothbrush, as revenge. Then you go on to describe her turn with him. Also, he got off both times but she hasn't. I would be interested to see how this goes.

Good start though

nooicenooicealmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for commenting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice idea, you could definitely flesh this out into a series if you wanted.

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