All Comments on 'Sleeping with My Customer'

First story!

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It's not at all surprising that such a slut's marriage is collapsing day by day. Probably, her husband was disgusted to touch her after such "smoke breaks".

What is the point of this story? The skank is only married in name only. If she wanted to be a skank why stay married?

Bitch, get divorced first, and only then twist and turn your tail!

Meh. Corny at best.

Not bad for a first effort, but PLEASE do yourself a favor: either get an editor to help you, or AT THE VERY LEAST, proofread your stories to catch the missing words, misspellings, and obvious breaks in the flow of what you're writing.

That being said, keep trying, as you had an interesting story line in a brief tale of bad behavior...

...seriously: keep writing !

EastCoaster

Great story, Continue please.

Had to stop reading. Poor grammar, unedited, make me think that English is not your first languge. Either that or you just plain flunked English. I think you can do better. Please proof read and get an editor.

Liked it. Well written and a very real situation that I'm sure has been played out at truck stops and cafés all over the country.

Poorly written with no editing and put in the wrong category. Not good, even for a first story.

Cunt cheating while on the clock.

Write more.

Ignore the negative comments. Keep writing, I'm leaking in my pants now.

This was an amazing story. Keep up the good work and the haters can fuck off.

......so where's the story?