All Comments on 'Sliding Doors'

messy......her hitting him like that is not what a sub would do.....not ever. she is psycho. no the same thing. clean that part up and it is better. leave it in with her losing control and hitting? doesn't work

@Anonymous Maybe, she's not who you think she is. Anyway, I haven't found a way to revise a story in Literotica so it's not happening.