All Comments on 'Slow Seduction Ch. 02'

Isn't this interracial?

I like the story but it feels like a bad version of 50 shades of gray.

Yes its interracial as I stated in a comment under my first chapter. I like when my readers use their imaginations. I'm not a writer that shoves everything in your face all at once. I've actually read 50 shades of grey (which I loved) but bondage has always been something I was into (WAaay before 50 shades) and this is how is plays in my head. If you think this is a bad version on 50 shades of grey I must be doing something right (even in its worse measurement.). Because that book was so great they made a movie out of it and you personally remembered it well enough to reference it here. AWSOME ! Thank you so much for your comment :)

The writing is excellent, the sex is erotic and the characters are engaging. But it really belongs more in Erotic Couplings than interracial. I can't decide what race they are.

Hello EVPHunter, I usually do not comment but I am really enjoying your story. Its obvious that some of readers aren't understanding its called "Slow Seduction'' for a reason. I get it. Keep it up. I like the way this is heading. :) Slow and Easy is the best way to have it!!!!

Your story is for sophisticated readers. It matters not who is white or who is black, one of them is.

This is a slow seduction story - revealed slowly for maximum tantalization.

Well written.

Keep it up, can't wait for Chapter 3

I fuckin love the story what the hell were you all complaining about ???