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ready52ready52almost 3 years ago

I have really enjoyed this story so far and look forward to reading more. The only parts I didn’t like was the camera up Rita’s butt and announcing that Brittney was adopted. The camera was a little much. I think you could have come up with something better than that.

Announcing that Rita was an adoptive mom went way beyond humiliation. It was cruel. You are a talented writer and could come up with something better for both parts.

Nevertheless, I still gave you a score of 5.

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