by nadia603000
I have really enjoyed this story so far and look forward to reading more. The only parts I didn’t like was the camera up Rita’s butt and announcing that Brittney was adopted. The camera was a little much. I think you could have come up with something better than that.
Announcing that Rita was an adoptive mom went way beyond humiliation. It was cruel. You are a talented writer and could come up with something better for both parts.
Nevertheless, I still gave you a score of 5.