by Sdaven
Sdaven
I thought your previous chapter in the apparent series was woeful, especially in the scrappy way you threw it together, as well as your obsession with cuckoldry or should I say being cheated on by your significant other. However, I stand before you so forever humbled. In this submission, you have truly surpassed the low bar you set yourself. If I didn't know better, I could believe that you are producing troll bait to get some form of limited notoriety from disgusted readers. This tale was rubbish. You don't seem aware of the art of creating a story with believeable characters and a plot that at least tries to make sense. For God's sake stop.
Why are you in the loving wives category with your girlfriend?
1 star
The worst Lind of LW poster. A no talent idiot who thinks idea is something new in LW.