All Comments on 'Slut learns not to touch herself'

Hell no, I had to skip parts of that I just couldn’t stomach it. I felt really really sorry for the girl and confused as to why she wouldn’t safe word out of that scene with the older married couple. It’s not because they’re older but because the girl truly didn’t want to do anything with them.

The written word can be elusive, addressing her as Slut and Whore came across as very negative to me I didn’t notice any terms of endearment associated with either ‘name’. It’s difficult to tell whether or not they’re intended as a negative humiliation tactic only used for punishment, or as I got the impression it was a 24/7 thing? Although it’s difficult to be sure from two pages of writing. Just as it’s difficult to know if she actively enjoys humiliation or not. It’s going to take a very long time before women can hear the words slut and whore and not categorise them as negative because it’s damned near impossible to reverse the male dominated social judgment of thousands of years. As such the words are going to hold a level of sexual taboo for a very long time. I actively see the words in a positive way, slut = sexually liberated (sex is not just

the guys!) as for whore = it’s a job nothing more or less. If it was a bad thing then what does that say about the people who use them?

This story can easily be viewed in at least two ways I read it as negative, but some might read it as an erotic punishment enjoyed on some level by all involved. The girl’s stress and reluctance to even go out in the car with her Master/ Dom lends itself to either a relatively new relationship or that he’s an utter bastard and she’s learned to expect bad things whenever he takes her out anywhere whilst she’s scantily clad.

Overall it was well very written and it flowed really well. I could easily visualise both scenes. I’m still left with mixed feelings, but everyone deserves a second chance so I’ll be looking out for more of your stories.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)

The first alarming part was when he gave her alcohol to prevent her from using her safe word. A good dominant would never want to cloud a submissive’s judgment. Safe words are meant to be used if the submissive feels that the situation requires it. I agree with the other comment. The story is well written, but the content itself prevented it from being a fully enjoyable read.