by GregLemond777
What a sad story.
There's no love or intimacy in Hannah's life, she's basically just an animal in permanent heat, fucking anything with a cock.
That Hannah has sex is only hinted at. I assume you mean Sally?
Given the title I dont think you should have been expecting a romance, I'm sorry if I have somehow managed to deceive you into reading a story that you dissaprove of.
I look forward to reading one that you have written as an example of how it should be done.
Thanks
Good for you to try at writing a woman's POV.
Good for you girl, go for it, my favourite fantasy, endless hard cock and just me being used in a gangbang, perhaps one day, I'll get lucky.
a really stupid story. I get it....she is a slut. Not really much of a story here.
I would love to meet such a sexually promiscuous sweetheart with her long lovely legs spread wide and her delicious pussy dripping. A dream divorced mother that would offer a friendly fuck to a man and his horny 18 year old brother, lucky bastards! Like that young man I too would have gone back for more, and wished I was older and very likely make a quite stupid mistake, and ask her to try marriage again. I mean how often do you meet a fucking dream babe, even in a Literotica story? GL please write another slut story for me to fantasize over, after all, these tales do not end with me paying out alimony or child support, so thank you for my safe sex!
I know I'm wasting my time but I'm a bit bored..
1) I always assumed that 'Loving wives' was an ironic title for the section. I didn't think people thought the stories in there were Mills & Boon.
2) It's just a story, it's not real.
3) Although this one was inspired by someone I know who is divorced and has been having regular sex with her ex for the past five years. Yes, honestly.
4) I can't please everyone. For those that hated it there are others that add it to their faves.
5) In principal, I write for my own amusement. For instance, all the characters in this tale have the names of people that I know from my local pub, small things like that make me laugh.
6) Negative comments - particularly anonymous ones - are designed to achieve what? Would you like me to stop publishing stories on here? Those of you that feel so strongly should be able to remember my user name and not read my next one. Just an idea..
7) I agree there isn't much plot here. I wrote it following my conversation with the divorcee who said how fantastic the sex had been when they got together...and I wondered what else she could tell me apart from that she is still fucking him...an I let my imagination take over...and added some bits from life...the being watched from the flat across the road happened to my wife and I, she didn't realise that we were being watched although I did.
8) Surprised there are no comments on the 'preggo' section, I thought the morality police on here would have hated that bit.
Ok, that's enough. Happy to talk to anyone if you want to use the contact option.
I did.not like your story, but I did like your last comment. Great explanation of why you write and your expectations of how it is received by readers. I can respect that.
I didn't like the story. I respect your comments and why you write, but I'll continue to give you 1*s if this is the topic in Loving Wives. ;0) There are a lot of others categories that you've done well in, like Erotic Coupling, that some of these may be better suited.