All Comments on 'Slut Son Ch. 01 - Awakened'

Keep going.

Interesting. Please continue.

Top story made me cum twice

Very good. Not into the whole seaman coated kink.. but if it was pussy juice, I'm sure he'd get some interest at work from the ladies. Keep up on your story, go where you want, it's our journey to imagine.

Yes....keep going!

Wow, came twice. Glad to hear that and I'm working diligently on chapter two.

@403ManMeat420 I appreciate your feedback. Dialing down the semen coated imagery, and adding interactions with some female coworkers. I have chapters two and three mapped out, but I will make sure there's a rewarding payoff later in the story.

Thank you all for follows and favorites.

Liked it a lot. Now reading the next chapter.

Yes I can't wait to read more!!!

Good start, more please. You need a proofreader though, some of the words you use don't mean what you think they mean.

Omg I love it I made such a mess

Love Sherri

Thus was an obviously well thought out story. Thought at times the dialog and scenes did lean toward an immature phase, but you waltz a slow dance back inline with your original plan. By all means, please do continue as I see an excellent series coming. For now, I give you 4 * and a drool for some exciting scenes with Aunt Brigit. Even the name is sexy

@Lee2012, thank you very much for your feedback. I do check the comments and I appreciate everyone who reads my stories and let's me know what they liked, or didn't like. I actually agree with your statement about the dialog, @chiefhal had a similar comment. I've never really written stories before, but that's a weak excuse for it being bad. It is something I am working on so please check back for my future entries in the series.

Welcome to Lit.com with such a banger of a story. I do agree with previous reviewers about dialogue but don't forget, dialogue tells the story better than long descriptions--but you know that.

My favorite comment and the one I agree with the most is from Sherri. On to chapter two. yumm

Great story. Keep on writing.

Incredible story, really enjoyed the themes and writing.

Great story, interesting spin. I've been looking for good female ejacullation stories. I hope that you keep writing. Looking forward for more.