All Comments on 'Slutty Tales Pt. 01: Maddie'

Nice story, but the grammatical errors, through me off. You should have someone who speaks and writes proper english, proofread your stories, such as an older person. Overall good story, but you have to watch the terms, knelt instead of kneeled for instance. Yes reading writing rithmatric were my best subjects. Wrote many a book report without opening a book, and got A+ every time.

Thank you for the comment. Constructive criticism always welcome. English is not my first, not even my second language and I'm a bit careless in my teenage/college syories, but I'll try to pay more attention next time. A proofreader would be great, no one volunteered yet😸