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WholesomeLuke5 months agoAuthorThank you for reading my story. I hope you enjoyed! If you have any feedback, please let me know :)
Anonymous5 months agoOne of the hottest things ive read in a whiiiile ! Please keep writing in the first person POV to the reader too. Cant wait to see more of these involving more action :)
Anonymous5 months agoGood job! Looking forward to a sequel with more build up, but also a little “action.” Like how it’s from her perspective. Lot of potential with this one if you continue to handle it well.
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