All Comments on 'Smartphone Spellbook Ch. 10'

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kyotie913kyotie913almost 4 years ago
Don't like the last two chapters

The first 8 chapters were enjoyable. The last two not so much. Vex is a conniving bitch and Ethan is a power and money hungry little wimp. Come on so cliché and a warn out story angle.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Editor, where are you?

Get one.

The first 4 chapters was great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Waste vs Waist

waste

/wāst/

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verb

1.

use or expend carelessly, extravagantly, or to no purpose.

"we can't afford to waste electricity"

Similar:

squander

fritter away

misspend

misuse

spend recklessly

throw away

2.

(of a person or a part of the body) become progressively weaker and more emaciated.

"she was visibly wasting away"

Similar:

grow weak

wither

atrophy

adjective

1.

(of a material, substance, or byproduct) eliminated or discarded as no longer useful or required after the completion of a process.

"ensure that waste materials are disposed of responsibly"

Similar:

unwanted

excess

superfluous

left over

scrap

2.

(of an area of land, typically in a city or town) not used, cultivated, or built on.

"a patch of waste ground"

Similar: uncultivated, barren, desert, unproductive, infertile

noun

1.

an act or instance of using or expending something carelessly, extravagantly, or to no purpose.

"it's a waste of time trying to argue with him"

Similar:

squandering

dissipation

frittering away

misspending

misuse

misapplication

misemployment

abuse

prodigality

extravagance

wastefulness

2.

material that is not wanted; the unusable remains or byproducts of something.

"bodily waste"

Similar:

rubbish

sewage

effluent

effluvium

garbage

trash

waist

/wāst/

noun

the part of the human body below the ribs and above the hips.

the circumference of a person's waist.

"her waist is 28 inches"

a narrowing of the trunk of the body above the hips.

"the last time you had a waist was around 1978"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hmm...

I liked Ethan at first, but not so much now. I wonder if he has a comeuppance coming?

SlofredSlofredalmost 4 years ago

Ethan needs something to happen which brings him back to reality. He is getting more and more unbelievable. Demon Rebellion, Another player who makes him reevaluate his views of the world, Or even a malfunction which causes him to have to Reboot of his Phone-Spell-book..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh, so THAT'S why Black Gold collapsed. I actually know someone whose father worked at Black Gold, and now co-owns an ocean exploration company or whatever with two other former employees.

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