All Comments on 'Smartphone Spellbook Ch. 13'

@Pthead: Thank you for the story. I will admit that I am curious: what is your intended pace for this story (overall that is), because you seem to be jumping between, "fairly slow" and "arse is on fire".

To elaborate a bit, in the earlier chapters there was a focus on the details (when something new was introduced), which helped flesh out the world/setting. And gave a sense of accomplishment to what Ethan got/obtained. The later chapters seem to have left that approach at the wayside?

@EndOfStory: The pacing changed because I found the details getting very bogged down and repetitive. This is extremely true in the next chapter, which is actually the last. I could have gone into a lot of detail, but a lot of it would have been repetition of things already discussed. So I decided, skipping those details and instead going with something fast paced was actually more interesting, even if it does make the story seem to jump forward at break neck speeds.