All Comments on 'Smartphone Spellbook Ch. 14'

So now for the story as it would have been with this aspect of his character. More of a good guy than before. Using his and his friends power to fix things that are not working as they should. 5 stars

This was so neat and tidy, I suspect you had Ruby clean everything up like a good little maid.

Over all really liked it even though not into anything anal myself, or world domination for that matter. Good read

Very well done! Thank you for your efforts and bringing life to this story

Liked the story but expected more fetish, liked the part where Ruby/Vex were tortured with orgasmdenial.. expected more latex/collars/pet play etc

I liked the intire story bud I must say I don't really liked the end with him becoming some kind of good angle. I hoped it would end with him ruling hell of something or at least let him keep his slave empire. It kind of suck that that is all gone now. but that aside it was a great story can't wait to see the next.

I thoroughly enjoyed the storyline However I started to Wonder what the hell is going on towards the end with him going on a power trip but you clean that up with the last chapter. The ending couldn’t have been better, well done.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Jest be cause all the warts are spilled correctly, that doe snot meme hat they make cents.

Please proofread your work.

And yet, oddly enough, you argued yourself right out of your own point because your message intent is completely understandable.

Bygones, this was fun, keep writing. 5*

A most interesting series to read, I can see a second book along the same lines but using a different person and demon as the starting point. I enjoyed this and can't wait to see what else you come up with. Keep up the writing and have a great time doing it.

Well done, congrats! A really good read thanks for sharing it.

"... The thing is, demonic magic was here before I was. It's not my creation, it's someone elses. Possibly left over from a previous god in a previous universe. I don't know, but it's pesky stuff. No matter what I do, I can't get rid of it. ..."

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Then that's not God. Maybe a god, but certainly not God with a capital G. Enormously powerful etc, sure. Almighty? Omnipotent? Nope. Just a wee bit better than the Ori, really. It's actually not all that surprising that such an immensely powerful entity would be so shortsighted and prone to self-delusion. Who's going to call them on it? Exactly.

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Hot story, nicely done. And you even managed to actually have something resembling a happy ending, very impressive.

omg that one part about his 'sword' enemy ... ok i giggled at that part. yeah you could use abit of proof reading otherwise great stuff.