by Shady_Lady
yo upped the game to five stars, very well done. it did everything but make me cum.
The surprise of being shown the visual of lesbian love was sort of expected. But when you included the idea of going public and showing a wider public, it was an idea that picked up a theme in an unexpected way. Kudos.
Don't know if you are casting about for the idea of a third ... but it might work if these characters escalated, enticed into filming an actual porno with a simple script, and only one or two camera people. The classic "couple in lust surprised by the husband" tale might work ... with the husband joining the lesbian in ravishing his wife. The set up with additional people getting to see the action close up, the bright lights to show details, knowing there will be a film, and the possibilities of a threesome ought to give you some options for even more titillation and invention.
And it was just as good as the first time. I guess it's too late for a third chapter in this series, but I can only hope.
Great story, wish I could vote 5 stars again.