All Comments on 'Smile For The Camera Ch. 02'

by TheBigCheese123

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EZ8ltEZ8ltalmost 2 years ago

I rated pt1 to 4 stars, this one to 2 though. The closet voyeur cliché stuff was way too far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I enjoy your writing, but I think you need to get to the fucking.

Mia talking dirty the whole time.

I'd prefer her in lingerie, heels, being a cum craving fuck slut.

However, your creative path is yours

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That was amazing. Please go further. I realy like your story.

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 2 years ago
nice

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

She needs to catch him watching her fucking her self and get to feel the real thing deep in her pussy

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

your work is amazing!! I cant wait to see what happens next, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, but you need to continue.

Ilovetophoto68Ilovetophoto6810 months ago

Please continue!!!

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Hi, my name’s Dan and I write short, light hearted sex stories. I usually stick to straight couples, but I will occasionally write about homosexual encounters, group sex and incest. I love to get feedback from you guys, and I’m always looking for new ideas and ways to improv...

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