by Voboy
This story is so full of passion and drama. It is a reminder of what life should be to one like Tom, drowning in apathy and complacency. He should
Magnificent! As always, your writing does NOT disappoint. 5 well-deserved stars for your witches and oh, so lucky Tom.
I have never read Robert Burns, so the author's notes at the beginning and end shed some light.
The story itself was mesmerizing. I loved the way you weaved Annie into Tom's "real" life.
Well told and held my attention throughout. Definitely a 5 rating for this theme. Congratulations on a good story.
Another soul bewitched and lost on Halloween. Good story and we'll updated for today.
Fantastic story. As ever, you don't disappoint. As the son of a Scotsman, I loved the link to Rabbie Burns' poem. Well-written and enchanting ( and hot!).
I loved this. 5 stars. Great storytelling. A wonderful Halloween story, full of sex and thrills.
Sexy, good phrasing, hot without being totally explicit in every paragraph.
Wonderful story. Thank you for stirring the spirit of Robert Burns this Halloween and letting it walk the earth again. I loved your use of adjectives throughout. No, let me take that back. I loved your adroit, artful and virtuoso use of adjectives throughout!