All Comments on 'Smooth Twink Meets Muscle Man'

There seems to be a of comparison between the dicks of the small Asian author and his large muscleman lover, and it seems as though their coupling was mainly aimed at the pleasure of the muscle-stud and not considering how much enjoyment his younger partner achieved.

The story was well written, but seemed very clinical.

That was really fucking hot !!

Love your story, especially the ending. I always had a fantasy to be cuddled to sleep with a rock hard meat inside of me. I wonder if he fuck you while he's dreaming and cum inside you some more. XP please continue writing more hot stories or experience of yours.

I'm somebody who admits to having had fantasies about being with a man but have never gone past thinking about it. If it were to happen I would sure want to with a guy like you instead of your lover because he would intimidate the hell out of me. I liked that part about rubbing cocks together because that was just about my only gay experience back when I was in my early teens and I often wish that it didn't stop there.

This is a great story. I'm a bi female and this is one of the hottest gay male stories I've ever read. I do hope you continue to pleasure us again. OFTEN.

Now you know the true meaning of EROTICA... Fabulous story.. god I hope you continue writing.. Your story was GREAT... you are a gifted writer.... an I hope your muscular Lover (who sounds like my Marine spouce) enjoyed reading your story as much as We.. your readers did.... Absolutely Erotic. ..

A very nice first effort. I hope you continue writing because this story was enjoyable.

I really liked this story it was easy to envision yourself riding that hard cock as he carried you around with his cock deeply embedded in you.

me being a sissy I just had to picture myself in my panties as he pulled them aside and fucked me and made me his

A cute hairless twink old enough and willing to please is a treasure. I could just imagine that little dicklet of his spurting wildly while the muscleman was ripping his asshole up

I would give anything to have been in your place and have this incredible stud fuck me the way you described. He sounds so fucking hot and you sound like a totally girly pussy boi and I totally want to be like you.